The clocks going back

Fokkina McDonnell’s post on her ever-fabulous blog today – here – prompted me to dig out this poem, from The Evening Entertainment:


BRITISH SUMMER TIME’S END

As Dad lolls down in the care-home armchair,
cleft double chin almost touching his shirt,
I ease him upright and, for what it’s worth,

unstrap his watch to wind it back an hour:
that Dad no longer knows the day, the month
or year is probably neither here nor there.

An un-drunk milky tea squats on a plate.
‘I was a crack shot; especially at
the Bren, but it was much too accurate.’

By night, he gets half-dressed for going out:
‘To interrogate a Russian spy, caught
red-handed with a nuclear secret.’

I ask him if he’ll eat his slice of cake.
‘I’m off to the school to teach them to waltz.’
The lead clinician laughs for laughter’s sake.

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  1. heathermoulson Avatar
    heathermoulson

    Love this piece. So poignant H

  2. acaciapublications Avatar
    acaciapublications

    A strong and memorable poem. Thank you for the link!

    1. Matthew Paul Avatar
      Matthew Paul

      Thanks, Fokkina – thanks for your lovely poem – it’s hard so write to well as you do about time -and the prompt.

  3. Lizzie H Avatar
    Lizzie H

    Love this poem and delighted to read Fokkina’s. Thanks, Matthew.

    1. Matthew Paul Avatar
      Matthew Paul

      Thanks, Lizzie.

  4. Nell Nelson Avatar
    Nell Nelson

    I like this poem very much. Took me a while to work out who was the author! 🙂

    1. Matthew Paul Avatar
      Matthew Paul

      Thank you, Nell!

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